The use of personal cars has increased more than ever before but this use of cars causes many problems. What are those problems? In order to reduce these problems, should we discourage people from using cars?

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people

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are using personal

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for their convenience and it impacts many issues

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using their own

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Traffic

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congestion

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and pollution are arising and it affects the

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humans. In order to reduce these problems, I strongly believe that

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should be discouraged from using their own

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, the use of personal

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impacts

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and it influences the time of

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office and school days,

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students and office workers have to wait more than half an hour in

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traffic

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and it affects their health due to toxic

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from the vehicle.

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, because of the toxic

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the environment is severely impacted by

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air pollution and respiratory disease like asthma was diagnosed

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people

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. In my view,

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people

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should be discouraged from using their own

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. In order to reduce these problems

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people

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should use public

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instead

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of their own

cars

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, by using public

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in our daily

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, there will be fewer vehicles on the road. The government can invest

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develop public

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for the benefit of the public.

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, by expediting

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practice the

traffic

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congestion

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and pollution get resolved. In conclusion,

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people

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are utilizing their own

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. Because of

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heavy

traffic

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congestion

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and air pollutants affect regular human

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. In my opinion, I discourage

people

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from using their own

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instead

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of public

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, by using public

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the problem of

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congestion

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and air pollutants will be sorted out.