The use of personal cars has increased more than ever before but this use of cars causes many problems. What are those problems? In order to reduce these problems, should we discourage people from using cars?

Nowadays,

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people

are using personal

cars

for their convenience and it impacts many issues

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using their own

cars

.

Traffic

congestion

and pollution are arising and it affects the

day to

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day

life

of

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humans. In order to reduce these problems, I strongly believe that

people

should be discouraged from using their own

cars

.

Firstly

, the use of personal

cars

impacts

traffic

congestion

and it influences the time of

day to

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day

life

.

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during

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office and school days,

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students and office workers have to wait more than half an hour in

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traffic

and it affects their health due to toxic

emission

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from the vehicle.

Secondly

, because of the toxic

emission

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the environment is severely impacted by

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air pollution and respiratory disease like asthma was diagnosed

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people

. In my view,

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people

should be discouraged from using their own

cars

. In order to reduce these problems

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people

should use public

transport

instead

of their own

cars

.

For example

, by using public

transport

in our daily

life

, there will be fewer vehicles on the road. The government can invest

and

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develop public

transport

for the benefit of the public.

However

, by expediting

this

practice the

traffic

congestion

and pollution get resolved. In conclusion,

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people

are utilizing their own

cars

. Because of

this

, there is

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heavy

traffic

congestion

and air pollutants affect regular human

life

. In my opinion, I discourage

people

from using their own

cars

instead

of public

transport

.

Moreover

, by using public

transport

the problem of

traffic

congestion

and air pollutants will be sorted out.