The use of personal cars has increased more than ever before but this use of cars causes many problems. What are those problems? In order to reduce these problems, should we discourage people from using cars?

Nowadays,
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people
are using personal
cars
for their convenience and it impacts many issues
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using their own
cars
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Traffic
congestion
and pollution are arising and it affects the
day to
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day
life
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humans. In order to reduce these problems, I strongly believe that
people
should be discouraged from using their own
cars
.
Firstly
, the use of personal
cars
impacts
traffic
congestion
and it influences the time of
day to
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day
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during
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office and school days,
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students and office workers have to wait more than half an hour in
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traffic
and it affects their health due to toxic
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from the vehicle.
Secondly
, because of the toxic
emission
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the environment is severely impacted by
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air pollution and respiratory disease like asthma was diagnosed
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people
. In my view,
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people
should be discouraged from using their own
cars
. In order to reduce these problems
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people
should use public
transport
instead
of their own
cars
.
For example
, by using public
transport
in our daily
life
, there will be fewer vehicles on the road. The government can invest
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develop public
transport
for the benefit of the public.
However
, by expediting
this
practice the
traffic
congestion
and pollution get resolved. In conclusion,
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people
are utilizing their own
cars
. Because of
this
, there is
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heavy
traffic
congestion
and air pollutants affect regular human
life
. In my opinion, I discourage
people
from using their own
cars
instead
of public
transport
.
Moreover
, by using public
transport
the problem of
traffic
congestion
and air pollutants will be sorted out.
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