Many parents go and work in other countries these days, taking their families with them. Do the advantages of development outweigh the disadvantages?

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phenomenon is rational to a certain extent. The following paragraphs would shed light on my viewpoint. On the one hand, the protestors of the topic in question have their reasonable ground.

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, it is undeniable that changing residences is an obstacle for

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again, which might result in several mental health issues like stress or even depression. Worse still, various

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find no way to be compatible with their new friends or would be abused by their peers due to racism.

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civilians would lead to a setback

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the economy of a nation. To elaborate, if excellent citizens do

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hinders their birthplace to develop its economy. In fact, in Vietnam, a significant number of outstanding students would like to study abroad and settle down there.

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, during the past few years, the government of Vietnam has promulgated regulations on attracting

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learners like

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remuneration policy.

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force enterprises to purchase mandatory social

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for their employees.

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, the above arguments are insufficient to overshadow the merits of the standpoint on

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offer an inordinate number of job opportunities for parents. Specifically,

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have the capability to offer employees

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diverse types of careers.

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provide residents with

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as they shall have to allocate the national budgets to other sectors, namely

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, health care, or security.

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are able to reside in high living

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are more modern and

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than those in poor ones.

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allows civilians to meet all requirements regarding education or healthcare. Citizens have

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public hospitals at any time and the curing fees are totally free of charge.

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to claim

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health insurance but it is limited.

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, they shall have to buy additional insurance to have opportunities to cover all their rising expense during the process of curing illnesses. In conclusion,

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to other cities might lead to several pitfalls for

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nation.

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, the government of a country should consider it a motivation to develop its economy, and it

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provides a household with many benefits.