Many students find it difficult to pay attention at school. What are the reasons for this? What could be done to solve this problem?

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children’s bad behaviour and poor quality teaching and
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attention. A number of
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inside the hall of schools while there are some
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one thing.
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children with funny ways of teaching.
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my history teacher can make the lesson more interesting even though
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lectures. To conclude, worse conduct and not quality schooling methods
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • concentration
  • attention span
  • distractions
  • technology
  • boredom
  • tiredness
  • engagement
  • learning disabilities
  • teaching techniques
  • classroom size
  • family issues
  • health problems
  • motivational strategies
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