You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: • explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months • say how your work could be done while you are away • ask for his/her help in arranging it

Dear manager, My name is Mohammad and I am the middle engineer in our firm. I am writing
this
letter to ask you about the opportunity to work in our head office in Canada for at least 6 months. To be honest, the reason for
this
demand is that I am willing to create a good relationship with our colleagues and reinforce my skills.
Moreover
,the possibility of immigration has been created by one of my companions and it can be a suitable chance for me to move to that country. Mr Brandon has taught
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If you confront with an insurmountable problem you can count on him since he is sophisticated like me in accounting. I will appreciate
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you aid me to organise my move to our head office.
Besides
that, I will wait for your advice and suggestion on that position. yours faithfully. Mohammad solati
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • professional development
  • global operations
  • cross-functional
  • remote work
  • progress updates
  • logistical arrangements
  • cultural exchange
  • continuity plan
  • enhance my skillset
  • broaden my horizons
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