It is suggested that everyone in the world wants to own a car, a TV and a fridge. Do you think the disadvantages of such a development outweigh advantages?
Nowadays,almost everyone wants a
car
,a TV and a fridge as some of the basic essentials of a good lifestyle. it has certainly made our everyday activities a lot easier.However
,I believe that in the long term view its disadvantages outweigh the disadvantages.
On the one hand,The growing usage of luxury items ,like car
, televisions and refrigerators has several benefits.Fix the agreement mistake
cars
Firstly
,The rise of consumer society stimulates economic growth.the increasing sales figure for cars and other household equipment are often associated with a growing economy , jobs being created,and well being of society.secondly
people can have a higher standard of living than before,As,travelling on the road is no longer tedious because individuals can sit in a Add a comma
,secondly
car
,listen to music and enjoy the comfort of air conditioning. as well as people may watch television to gain knowledge or watch their favourite shows.Furthermore
they can Add a comma
,Furthermore
also
use a fridge to enjoy fresh meals.
On the other hand
,some benefits are outweighed by their potential problems.primarily the consumption of the car
is held responsible for environmental pollution. Exhaust emissions from automobiles impair the quality of air and subsequently
affect individuals
health.Change noun form
individuals'
individual's
For example
,In many big cities,urban citizens are suffering from chronic respiratory issues due to poor air quality. usage of fridges and televisions also
puts pressure on the electric supply in the world. The growing usage of these devices merely compounds the problem of insufficient electricity that has become intractable in many parts of the world.
To conclude,taking a long-term view.I would argue that the drawbacks of this
trend certainly outweigh the advantages.Submitted by todear7krishna on
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