Students should focus on learning in the classroom rather than show their status by wearing fashionable clothes. Thebefore, all students have to wear school uniforms. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Students
are fascinated by wearing fashionable clothes
. A classroom is a place where everyone is equal there is no difference between race, colour, rich or poor therefore
I promptly believe that uniform
is compulsory in school
.
To commence with, students
are crazy to wear new clothes
and show them to other classmates and compare them with the others. In school
children go to study and there is no requirement to wear fashionable or costly Add a comma
school,
clothes
and also
it reduces the headache of purchasing new clothes
for school
and thinking about what to wear. It also
helps in parents' pockets to save money for the child's future,
and Remove the comma
apply
also
helps schools
maintain such
decorum in schools
and easy-to-manage students
in schools
. In a recent article in the new york times
about Correct your spelling
New York Times
school
uniforms, they always prefer to choose schools
where is
a system of uniforms because it saves money Correct pronoun usage
there is
as well as
they don't have gone for
shopping frequently to purchase Wrong verb form
to go
clothes
for their child and it the time body grow and they need to purchase in a short time.
In addition
, Uniforms are the symbol of equality, in ,schools
everyone is equal there is no difference between the cast, colour, and rich or poor they have equal rights to learn in the same way. It helps schools
to find out their students
in public crowds in case of missing and also
helps if some unknown children came
to Wrong verb form
come
school
without a uniform
can be easily identified. Every school
has their own separate unique uniform
and it mostly helps in fairs or events in which many schools
participate. For Example
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interview
the student about their journey he Replace the word
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told
that the Verb problem
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school
help
him to reach Wrong verb form
helped
this
level and that he has
proud of the Verb problem
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school
and their uniform
.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that uniform
is must
compulsory in Verb problem
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schools
in certain situations they grant relaxation to parents like one day of the week is a free day, but good for all days.Submitted by jayminprajapati9 on
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