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Nowadays more and more older people who are looking for work have to compete with younger people for the same jobs. what problem does this cause ? what are the possible solutions ?

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In recent decades, competition for the same
positions
 has increased significantly between young
people
 and an increasing
number
 of older workers. The impending essay will discuss the
issues
 of
this
 statement and will elaborate on two possible remedies with a logical conclusion. One of the main
issues
 is that most younger generations may avoid learning academic skills because they will apply for any position when they graduate from school
this
 may lead to them avoiding academic education in higher learning environments
such
 as University or college.
Furthermore
, becoming
worse
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 relationship between these two groups will be another issue of competition for the same position resulting in the percentage of hate will increase significantly in the community because an increasing
number
 of elderly society may have
a physical arguments
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 while getting a job.
For example
, the Times has announced that almost 1000 workers
has
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 injured in Tajikistan just for getting seats in school and 676 of them were
people
 60 years old. There are two viable solutions for these
issues
.
Firstly
, the selection of
positions
 should be by degrees resulting in an increasing
number
 of high
positions
 will be selected by experienced ones
this
 may encourage youngers to continue their knowledge in Universities and get their master's degree before applying for any workplace.
As a result
, the
number
 of
literate
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the literate
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nation
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 will increase dramatically in
the
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society. another remedy is that Adultescent should apply for physical jobs because they have enough energy to implement the position properly and mental work should be done by old
people
. To conclude, In these days, an increasing
number
 of old workers have to compete for the same
positions
 as younger individuals.
Therefore
 avoiding academic knowledge and decreasing the level of trust will be the main
issues
, applying for a job with a diploma and utilizing physical work by young
people
 will be the best solutions.
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