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Culture is turning similar around the world. What are the reasons? Is it a positive trend or a negative trend?

#culture #world #trend
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Nowadays,every country in the world has its own
culture
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 and language but because some reasons make all
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culture
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cultures
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changing
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change
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to
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 similar ways.If all specific
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culture
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 merge together to be world
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culture
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cultures
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 that will be positive or negative in long term? To start with,I think I have three reasons why
culture
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 is turning similar around the earth and I will explain in
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the next
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 paragraph.
Firstly
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,I believe nowadays every country have communication with
other country
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another country
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 more than before and
that is
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number
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 one reason
in
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this
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 statement because communication can make people
to
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understand each other due to contract
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a nation
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 combine
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 together.
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