You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to study. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter, • describe the situation • explain your problems and why it is difficult to study • say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

#room #college #student #arrangement #study #accommodation #officer #situation

Dear sir, I am a student in my

first

-year pre-medical and I am living in your college hostel

room

number 22. I am writing

this

letter to draw your attention towards a serious issue which I am facing nowadays in my shared

room

week my annual exams are due and I left my home only to study here in a hostel in a calm environment.

However

, unfortunately,

this

room

is facing our sports ground and every afternoon, when I start studying for my modules very annoying noise, starts disturbing me and it keeps on going for at least 3 hours due to which the peak time of my study is wasted. I want a

room

which is in a quiet location as I only can memorize my books in a peaceful environment. I wonder if you could pay heed to

this

issue as soon as possible. Your prompt response will be awaited. Your's sincerely, Sana Ghani.

Submitted by drsanaghani on Mon Dec 26 2022

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