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Nowadays public transport prices are constantly increasing. Why do you think it is happening? How can this problem be solved?

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In the modern world, public
movement
 fees are growing.
This
 essay will highlight the principle
causes
 and the solutions to resolve
this
 issue.
in
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 my opinion the root
causes
 are
high
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the high
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cost
 of fossil
fuel
 and environmental taxes which make
tickets
 more expensive. The possible solutions are using public transport and alternative types of
vehicles
. There are many
causes
 held responsible for
this
 issue.
firstly
, fossil
fuel
 is too expensive
due to
 many countries do not have natural resources
of
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for
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 oil and gas so they must be imported to the countries at a high
cost
.
for
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 instance , the USA does not have enough resources
of
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 oil and gas.
As a
result
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 it has to buy barrels of them from Iran and Arabia.
therefore
, it makes the
cost
 of fossil
fuel
 increase which affects on price of public
movement
tickets
.
Secondly
, the high salaries of administrative workers make
tickets fee
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ticket fees
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 expensive because many
companies
 are keen
on
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to pay bonuses
for
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to
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 directors of
companies
.
For example
, LRT company in NUR_SULTAN have paid high salaries to the finance directors of
companies
.
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 the issues are serious,
there
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and there
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 are some possible measures that can be taken.
to begin
 with, people could use alternative types of
vehicles
.
In other words
, solar and
wind powered
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wind-powered
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 cars and
busses
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buses
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 can be convenient and harmless because they are independent of oil and gas which are not renewable resources.
Consequently
, they do not emit toxic gasses
such
 as carbon dioxide.
In addition
 to
this
,
government
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 should motivate people to use public transportation.
More
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 customers,
more
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and more
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tickets
could be
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sold
so
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companies
 are able to gain huge amounts of revenue. Ultimately, the
tickets
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ticket
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 prices decrease.
For example
, Japan is an overpopulation country
hence
 most of the folk use public
vehicles
 to go to work so the
tickets
 are at low
cost
. In conclusion, two
causes
 lead to
increase
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the increase
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of
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in
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 public
movement
 fees ,
such
 as
high
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the high
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cost
 of fossil
fuel
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fuels
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 and
high
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the high
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 salaries of administrative workers. There are two viable solutions for these
issue
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issues
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including
usage
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the usage
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 of public
movement
 and solar and
wind powered
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wind-powered
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vehicles
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