Animal are in danger of extinctions. Some people say we should protect only those animals which are useful to humans. Do you agree or disagree?

IT IS TRUE THAT MANY
SPECIES
OF LIFE HAVE IN EXTINCTIONS OR DISAPPEARED FROM THE
EARTH
.SOME PEOPLE ASSERT THAT WE JUST NEED TO SAVE ONLY SOME
SPECIES
WHICH IS HELPFUL IN SOME WAYS TO US. I DISAGREE WITH
THIS
STATEMENT. TO COMMENCE THAT, EVERY
SPECIES
OR HUMAN ARE DEPENDING ON EACHOTHER OR THERE IS ONE CYCLE THAT
MAKE
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STABILITY OF
EARTH
. TO ELABORATE ,
SPECIES
GIVE MUCH SUPPORT TO HUMANS IN MANY POINTS. IF THE CYCLE IS BROKEN AT ANY POINT, THERE WILL BECOME A DISASTER FOR EVERY OTHER
SPECIES
. FOR ILLUSTRATION, JUST IMAGINATION , SHEAP WILL LOOP FROM OUR PLANET. WE CAN NOT GET NATURAL WOOL FROM ANY OTHER
SPECIES
OR ARTIFICIALLY.
AS A RESULT
, WE NEED TO MORE SUFFER IN COOL PLANCE OR WINTER TIME.
FURTHER
STRENGTHENING THE VIEW , SCIENTISTS DO MANY EXPERIMENTS ON VARIOUS KINDS OF ANIMALS AND
ALSO
SOME OF THE USEFUL IN MEDICAL SCIENCE. TO EXPLICATE ,SOME
SPECIES
PARTS ARE MORE USEFUL FOR SOME KIND OF SPECIAL MEDICINES .
FOR EXAMPLE
, SCIENTISTS CAN DO EXPERIMENTS ON THE ANIMALS ,BEFORE THEY WILL GIVE THEM TO US AS MEDICINE.
AS A RESULT
, WE CAN NOT NEED TO MAKE ANY EXPERIMENTS ON OUR BODIES OR PEOPLE.
ALSO
, GOVERNMENT NEED TO PROVIDE SOME SPECIAL FUNDING FOR SAVING OR PROTECTING THE ALL KIND OF
SPECIES
, WHO IS AVAILABLE ON THE
EARTH
. TO CONCLUDE, WE ALL KNOW THAT HUMAN IS THE MOST POWERFUL SPECIE ON THE
EARTH
THAN OTHERS. DEFINITELY, WE NEED TO THINK OR NOT BECOME HARMFUL TO OTHERS. BECAUSE
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THIS
, WE ALL DEPEND ON EACH OTHER . IN THE
LAST
SAVE ANIMALS SAVE PLANETS.
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