Increasing number of people are choosing cosmetic surgeries. Why do people have operations to change the way they look? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

In today’s era, most

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want to look beautiful with the help of cosmetic

surgeries

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. Surprisingly, the number of cosmetic operations is escalating day by day. In my opinion, to some

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it is a negative development because

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situation can lead to some serious health problems in individuals and

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lead to the wastage of money. On the one hand,

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do have

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because they want to look pretty and confident. In some cases,

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as acid attacks,

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or burn incidents; sometimes it becomes necessary to have

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cosmetic

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the confidence and self-esteem of

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acid-attack survivors, going through

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would be the best option for them. Indeed,

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makes them more confident and their self-esteem increases by means of

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cosmetic

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one needs to go through several beauty injections, medicines, and the pain which comes through operations.

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to increase some serious health problems

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example: migraines, hormonal in-balance,

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; just because of the side effects of these medicines and injections.

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amount of money on these

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money could be saved for the future and for emergency situations

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any unexpected circumstances. So, these can be considered as aspects of

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negative development. To conclude, in my opinion,

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there are some positive factors

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choosing cosmetic

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negative consequences should not be ignored.

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should understand its benefits and drawbacks before going through any beauty

surgery

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