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Your neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbors. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologies describe what action you will take

#neighbors #noise #house #apologies #action
Dear Mr Sharma, I am your neighbour and I am writing with regard to the concerns you have raised about noise pollution from our house for several days. These loud noises are
due to
 the woodwork
that is
 going on because one of our master cupboards has been eaten by a termite and now we are replacing it with a new one. Being a neighbour I want to apologise for the inconvenience
that is
 caused to you , owing to the fact that you are suffering from a few medical issues and the physicians have asked you to take complete rest. In order to, reduce the problem,
firstly
,I would ask the carpenters to work indoors most of the time and
secondly
, I would request them to use a power hammer
instead
 of a manual one because they are still left with three days of work. I hope you would understand
this
 issue and I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully,
Submitted by parmarjas3 on

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coherence cohesion
Be mindful of the logical structure of your letter to ensure a clear flow of ideas.
task achievement
Ensure the letter addresses all aspects of the task prompt, including a more specific explanation of the noise and a detailed plan for action.
task achievement
Use a suitable and polite tone throughout the letter, maintaining a consistent level of formality.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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