Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In our fast-modernized society,
although
lots of
people
are supplied with a job
that is
not fulfilling or lack
of
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money, they
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with their occupation.
However
, other
folk
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declare
this
is important to develop that kind of
situations
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. It is greater for
people
to try for
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life
and job satisfaction. I firmly
agree
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the latter idea.
To begin
, the major reason that
people
think that they should accept their circumstances since they are so afraid to test themselves with new situations
such
as finding
new
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job, start-up a business, and so forth. They have
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enough power and trust to themselves for changing their
life
. They tend to show gratitude for what they already have in their
life
. To substantiate the idea, I would like to quote the philosophy of the Stoic's that "take
life
as it comes" It is absolutely good but
people
must not stay
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the same level, they always
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try and improve their abilities as
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as they can.
On the other hand
, there are several alternatives to enhance that kind of bad
situations
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. In fact, nothing will improve without giving it a try. It
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that developments are always possible with a correct type of
attitudetherefore
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attitude therefore
, now various events that help them are increasing,
for example
, psychologists and motivators who increase their self-confidence. These
people
help
people
with low self-confidence and inner fear and increase their confidence and purpose in
life
. In conclusion,
although
some
people
consider that they should accept their standard
life
, I strongly agree that we need to improve our
life
better and everyone can respect us.
Submitted by jefnesbit on

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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