Question-Large companies use sports events to promote their products.Some people think this has a negative impact on sports.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people are of the opinion that advertising products in sports events
has
adverse effects on Change the verb form
have
Add an article
the game
game
.I strongly disagree with the statement because I believe that it is advantageous for companies as well as Fix the agreement mistake
games
its
audience.Below are some Correct pronoun usage
their
my
viewpoint to support my statement.
On the one hand,using programs and Change preposition
of my
sportsperson
for advertisement is very common in Fix the agreement mistake
sportspersons
present
scenario and it resulted in favour of the big companies and sports.It motivates Add an article
the present
to
amuse Correct pronoun usage
them to
oneself
and Correct pronoun usage
themselves
encourage
them to win the game.Correct subject-verb agreement
encourages
Moreover
,to maintain the reputation of the advertising brand and themselves they play hard and it improves their game.So,promoting products in events enhances the play power.For example
,it is often seen that a successful individual or team always endorses some of the brands,which encourages them to maintain their winning streak.
On the contrary
,one of the negative impact
of promoting products during Change to a plural noun
impacts
display
of outdoor events is that the team spirit or Correct article usage
the display
sportspirit
Correct your spelling
sport spirit
lost
somewhere while maintaining the superiority of brands.It Add a missing verb
is lost
also
effects
Replace the word
affects
mental
health of the player.Correct article usage
the mental
For instance
,while branding if the sale of advertising product
drops,it will have an adverse effect on Fix the agreement mistake
products
mental
health of the sportsperson,which results in bad performance.Add an article
the mental
Thus
,having an
negative impact on flourishing oneself.
To conclude,I completely disagree with the statement that branding has a negative impact on physical recreation because branding leads to Change the article
a
maintain
the Wrong verb form
maintaining
will power
and determination for success in play.Correct your spelling
willpower
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite