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Many psychologists believe that social media is the main reason for stress of people in the modern life. Do you agree?

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Recently, the social network caused
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pressure
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 individuals in modern society
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 has become a heated controversy. It is
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uncommon
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 fact that an increasing number of psychologists provided powerful evidence to support the hypothesis. In my opinion, I partly
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 it, because
evey
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every
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 has two sides.
First
 of all, it is no doubt that social
media
 brought
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 negative influence on modern society.
First
, some users are spreading money-worshipping value via using social
media
.
For example
, there is a terrible phenomenon that a majority of
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 would like to share
luxuries
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 photos on social
network
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;
hence
,
this
behavior
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 may produce some potential
stress
 to some
youngers
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younger
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 who do not have
ability
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 to buy luxuries.
In addition
, a false coverage that exaggerates the ease of challenging tasks may increase the
stress
 of the young generation, because they have a wrong cognition that success is
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 easy thing.
For instance
, according to
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 latest survey from Singapore Social News, approximately 80%
youngers
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 aged 20 to 30 years believe that success is so easy. So, there
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 some misleading information from social
media
 that cause mental
stress
.
On the other hand
, it is a not ignored fact that social
media
 can help the public release their
stress
.
This
 is because that social network is the most fashionable method to entertain;
therefore
,
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social
media
 plays a positive role on decreased
stress
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the
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ordinary people. In conclusion,
although
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social
media
 could help citizens to sober
stress
, it is an obvious fact that it definitely increases
stress
 to the public, due to the spread of money-worshipping awareness and the existence of false coverage.
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