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The world has seen an enormous increase in flights for leisure, business and commercial purposes around the world over recent years. what do you think are the main advantages and disadvantages of such flights? do you think flights should be taxed more?

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It is true that travelling by flight serves people’s demand in many sectors
such
 as leisure, business and commercial.
This
 essay will discuss several benefits and many drawbacks related to
this
. One of the main advantages of travel by
aircraft
 is that it helps save
time
to
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 consumers when commuting. Fly
time
 always accounted for half of the
time
 compared to
traveling
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travelling
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 by cars or motorbikes. By doing so, people can move fast without much
time
, contributing to a significant development in the tourism industry. Another benefit is that commercial companies can maximize their profit thanks to the development of transportation
system
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systems
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. In the past, customers had to wait for a long
time
 to receive their cargo when they ordered it oversea,
therefore
 their satisfaction would decline. The
more
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increase in transportation system
ensure
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the
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profit for company which rely on
distribution
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.
Nevertheless
, universal access to
aircraft
 with many purposes,
such
 as commercial and business has
it
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 own downsides. The most apparent issue could be that many people choosing to travel by flight rather than use private vehicles can lead to a decline in the quality of the environment.
Accordingly
, the number of poisoned fumes that
aircraft
 release into the air is much higher than that of cars and motorbikes combined.
Furthermore
, the gasoline required to fill
aircraft
 is
also
 twice as higher as private vehicles. In conclusion, we should not raise taxes in the flight sector with the hope of coping with environmental issues.
Although
aircraft
have
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its
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their
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 own disadvantages;
however
,
it
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they
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 can help boost the quality of people's life since they can move fastly around the world.
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