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the plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year

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The given maps demonstrate the southwest airport site in the present and after renovation in the
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 year. Overall, there is a considerable expansion from the middle to the north while more facilities will be constructed in the south. In the north part of the map, the gates area will be enlarged, and the number of gates will be almost doubled from 8 to 18 while the walkway to the gates will be transformed into the sky train.
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, shops in the west will be removed completely. The security passport control area and the arrivals and departures remain unchanged in the future plan.
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, there are some changes, including the check-in space will be located in the
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 of the cafe, while cafes will be doubled and will be found on the east and south-west. The bag drop will be opened under security passport control near the west. In the southeast, ATM and car hire will be established, which are close to the arrival entrance.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • terminal
  • car park
  • runways
  • redevelopment
  • proposed changes
  • expanded terminals
  • new gates
  • additional parking
  • amenities
  • navigation
  • environmental impact
  • economic impact
  • job creation
  • traffic congestion
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