SOme countries are considering imposing curfews in whicgh tenenagers will not be allowed outdoors at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this policy

It is true that certain nations around the world are trying to not allow young

people

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outside without their families. I completely agree with

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statement, the impending essay will discuss the same with a logical conclusion. There are multiple reasons why a country

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not let

children

to

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walk during the dark

time

in the city.

To begin

with,

this

policy may encourage

children

to stay at home and pay attention to their education because they will have plenty

time

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to learn academic skills at home resulting in a significant increase in the level of their knowledge.

As a result

, they will implement their

homeworks

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homework

properly.

For example

, in Tajikistan,

young

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the young

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generation is not allowed to spend

time

in the streets after 8:00 pm

due to

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almost 88% of students get high

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in their entire exams at school.

Furthermore

, staying at home during the nights

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teenagers from hazards because most

of

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gangs or thieves start robbing during

the

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dark

time

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and they target weak

people

especially

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young

children

. The Times has announced that in 2018 almost 76767

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people

were robbed by small gang groups in India more than half of them were

children

under 14 years old.

To conclude

, certain countries around the globe may consider

to ban

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teenagers from walking outside during the night if they do not out with their older ones.

This

essay agrees with

this

policy because increasing the level of knowledge in the community

amount

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among

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the

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young individuals and being safe from hazards will be the positive

sides

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of it. pay attention to their homework

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time

on learning  leads

increase

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knowledge

knwoledge

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knowledge because

becasue

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because

they study more high

score

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safe them from hazards some countries are not safe because most gangs and

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thieves

theives

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thieves

start working during the

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night

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nigh

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it may harm them if they walk alone being with

group

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a group

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or older

people

may decrease the change of robbing