Details of politicians’ private lives should not be published in newspapers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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world,

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plethora of

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believe

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not right to do viral

of

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the

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politicians

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personel

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personal

life

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. My standpoint is to protect each

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private lifestyle.

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and foremost, there are significant benefits

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a Politician. Someday they become a famous

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their society. Where they always

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and go with a big protocol.

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they have a strong personal

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with every kind of

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in their field.

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, majority of the

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politicians

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children's

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spend their lives like a royal family. The most

conspicious

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reason why

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believe

with

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view is that

politicians

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are humans with respect and dignity

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some people

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media

spokesperson

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do not respect

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bridge between

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a politician and

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indiviual

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individual

itself.

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a public servant is not

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dreams

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.

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Furthermore

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they

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share some private life with their kids not as a politician but as a father,

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sometime

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we witnessed that some

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paparazzi's

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always intrigued

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their family life. To illustrate some

politicians

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allegations from their fake reporting by

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there

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family is not very strong and failed to cope

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filthy scandals.

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could result in a decline in each

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basic ability. To conclude, the

afformentioned

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aforementioned

issues should be addressed properly as each humankind should secure their personal matters aside. I believe that the government should research these various problems if they want to lead a respectable future for

upcoming

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the upcoming

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generation.