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Although there are a lot of translation software available, learning a language could still be advantageous. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, the number of websites specializing in translation flourishes,
however
 learning a new language can bring many benefits. I am a strong advocate of
this
 statement, considering that software is not a hundred per cent accurate and that any technology can not be very helpful during an oral conversation. Every dialect is complicated, with many rules of grammar, and many synonyms
that is
 the reason why artificial intelligence can not perfectly translate all sentences.
In other words
, the translation software makes a large number of mistakes and is accurate. When someone uses google traduction,
for example
, to translate a letter, the recipient may be surprised because some sentences are not easy to comprehend.
One
 other argument to consider against
this
 technology is that they need internet,
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 someone without a battery or internet in a foreign airport can just use his
one
 knowledge. The beauty of learning a new language is that it brings
one
 to actually speak with other people. Any technology has the capacity to become fluent when
one
 is speaking, yet. Needless to say that speaking with someone overseas is
one
 of the joys
this
 world has to offer considering that leads to discovering another culture, another way of life it is fantastic. In order to have access to
this
 state of joy working is necessary, new technologies can help but they certainly can not substitute for
this
 hard work. In conclusion, I think that translation software is a good way for helping to learn a new language, even though there are not totally accurate.
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 I think that learning another dialect is very satisfying and can put people
one
 step ahead of others who do not.
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