What is homelessness? And what you think about the reasons of for people having home less

#homelessness #people #home

Homelessness is a situation in which

one

is not capable of having any home shelter to live in, neither owned nor rented

due to

poor economic conditions. There can be many reasons that some people

are having

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have

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homes and can mainly be categorised into two categories which are self-made conditions and another is external factors, which I will

be explaining

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explain

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in my below paragraphs. Beginning with the former

Correct pronoun usage

apply

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one

, the first example in

this

category could be drug addiction, which may create

such

situations that

leads

Correct subject-verb agreement

lead

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to home less of a prestigious social being. Another is ignoring

inflation

, which means that some people are not considering

inflation

not

Correct word choice

and not

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forecasting the future situations that could

be resulted

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result

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from

this

inflation

. For ,example a person can be living a satisfactory lifestyle in the present day and not making any effort to increase his revenue or salary,

then

he may face difficulties in future because

inflation

is rising and we cannot predict when a situation may come in which

inflation

may rise instantly,

then

such

person can lead to even homeless conditions. Moving the latter

one

which is External factors, which may include natural calamities and war between countries, resultant of which can be the destruction of properties, which could become a reason for

homeless

Replace the word

homelessness

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. For ,Example fire in

one

's factory may result in a huge loss, that could not be recoverable. It can be concluded that

one

can control some factors that may lead to homeless, but there can be some situation, which is not controllable in

one

's hand.

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task response

The essay adequately addresses the topic by discussing the reasons for homelessness, but it lacks depth and specific examples. The response is somewhat complete but lacks thorough development of ideas.

coherence cohesion

The logical structure of the essay is generally clear. However, the introduction and conclusion could be more substantial to provide a better sense of closure and introduction to the topic.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

258 words

5.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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What is homelessness? And what you think about the reasons of for people having home less

Fully explain your ideas

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In order to study effectively, it requires comfort, peace and time. So it is impossible for a student to combine learning and employment at the same time because one distracts the other. Is it realistic to combine them at the same time? Support your opinion with examples.