Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

In
this
contemporary epoch, a section of society believes that the vanished species of some specific flora and fauna are the major reason behind some environmental issues of
this
time, while others opine that there are many noticeable factors, which are responsible for
this
issue.
This
essay agrees with the latter view because nowadays, the atmosphere is mostly affected by some human activities
such
as air
pollution
which is created by factories,
vehicles
produce noise
pollution
and various chemicals and plastic waste enhance
water
and
land
pollution
. To commence with, some thought that animals and plants vanish and just because of that, the
food
chain is disturbed. The
food
chain is the most important part of the environment. To say it, all creatures have their own importance in the
food
chain, if any specie vanishes from it, it creates
an
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unavailability of
food
.
For example
, if earthworms lose from
land
, the fertility of
land
decreases, because earthworms are one of the major reasons behind the fertilization of
land
.
This
creates
land
pollution
.
On the other hand
, people think that there are more factors, which affect the environment
such
as cutting trees for the modernization of cities, increasing the number of
vehicles
, and some plastic waste and chemicals being thrown into
water
bodies.
In other words
, in today’s time, more forest areas and trees are cut-down for building more residential and commercial buildings and most of the
water
bodies are polluted because of releasing some toxic matter by factories.
For instance
, a survey conducted by ‘the Aaj Tak’ in Delhi that 80% of the total environmental issues are just because of an increasing number of
vehicles
. In conclusion,
although
the vanishing number of some flora and fauna are responsible for environmental problems, releasing toxic matter into
water
bodies, releasing smoke from
vehicles
and decreasing the area of forest are the main environmental issues.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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