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Today's school should teach their students how to survive financially in the world today. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statements.

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Money plays
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 role in human life from elementary requirements to affluent lifestyles. In
this
 technological epoch, educational Institution tutors their pupils about the necessity of finance in their daily life. I completely
agree
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 the following statement. In
this
 essay, I will explain my viewpoint in detail in the ensuing paragraphs.
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 people makes tons of transaction each day in exchange for currency. To elucidate, the public often purchases or makes sales with the value of money rather than the weight, size, and quality of
such
 products.
For instance
, if a Customer goes to departmental stores, they will find discounts and combo offers Whereas they do not give look at the expiry date of that brand.
Furthermore
, individuals feel secure when they have a qualified amount as their bank balance. To explain human who is wealthy gets an opportunity to build companies in various field which has
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fluctuating risk that can be bear efficiently.
Although
 they are accessed loans or debenture from
citizenscitizen
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citizens citizen
 of that country, they acquire the courage of risk-bearing To recapitulate the above essay,
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scholars scholar
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 the initial phase of the like should have cognitive skills related to finance for the betterment of their future.
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