ome people say that only reason for learning a foriegn language is inorder to travel to or work in a foreign country.Others says that these are not the only reason why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your opinion?

The importance of learning
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which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while
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reject
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controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my
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the former proposition appears to be more rational.
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positive and negative reviews of
this
trend and
thus
will lead to a logical conclusion. There are myriad of reasons which will
further
explain
this
argument but the most preponderant
one
stems from the fact that learning
foreign
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language
is play a very important role in
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life . Because through
this
they can go overseas countries and continue their study . Another pivotal aspect of
this
argument is that
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by learning international
language
masses can find
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job
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and earn which
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their needs
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as well as their families.
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, if they go overseas countries without learning they can't understand want other people
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. Needless to say, all these merits
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stand in
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good stead.
However
, there are some pitfalls that negate these arguments and which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of
this
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one
of the most alarming
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is that learning English is not only use in foreign but
also
in India, nowadays, in
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schools children' learning English which
gaves
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gave
them more confident and
also
encourage them to deal with society.
For instance
, these days on social media and shopping websites only allow English searching . According to the agreement
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aforementioned above,
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conclusion that the benefit of learning
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language
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instrumental indeed
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