In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travek to large shopping centres or malls to do their shopping.

It has been observed due to digitalisation and startup reasons many small
shops
have been closing.Now
Customers
have many options to buy their brand either online or in big shopping malls. I believe
this
is the correct indication of development.I am going to explain my thoughts in both expect.
However
, The Local store has few benefits as
customers
don'
t
need to drive far to purchase any
product
.
Therefore
,it will avoid driving, and traffic rush and help with pollution control, which is beneficial for the environment and society.The Local store gives some employment for those who can'
t
go far for the job due to many reasons. Whereas the local shop doesn'
t
keep all the required items
finally
consumer need to visit large shopping centres eventually.The Local small stores can'
t
give any offers because they are not getting big margins due to transportation. On the other ,hand Large shopping centres provide
customers
with all
product
shopping under a single building. They will provide the client with a good offer
also
because they are ordering big stock and getting the same
product
at big margins.The client gets the option to choose their
product
for their own budget and use.Children's entertainment games are
also
had in shopping complexes nowadays.So after busy ,life you can leisure your time.Even
customers
can get multiple manufacturers for a single
product
in the shopping complex and it allows
customers
to choose as per their budget and use. The Markets are now diversified in
this
5G era, people are
also
started to do their shopping online. They are getting many offers on online platforms due to that competition has increased significantly. In the current ,situation only big shopping centres are competing not the local small
shops
. Having all
this
consideration, local
shops
are closing rapidly because of their various factors like discounts, categories of products in spite of visiting local
shops
, and people's convenience to go shopping malls.
Subsequently
, I assert it is a positive trend for the development of our society.
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