People produce more garbage than in the past. Explain how it is affecting us and the measures that could be taken to address the situation. Provide specific examples and explanation to support your answer.

The main reason
of
Change preposition
for
show examples
producing more garbage is that
,
Remove the comma
apply
show examples
the population of the world are rising constantly. . To be
honest
Add a comma
,honest
show examples
in the past a number of wars were
to
Correct your spelling
so
show examples
much that every day hundreds of people were killed in battles. ,
However
Add a comma
,However
show examples
we can not see
such
battles in modern life and
this
is
lead
Replace the word
leading
show examples
to
rising
Add an article
the rising
a rising
show examples
population of people. There are a lot of ways which can be
solution
Add an article
the solution
a solution
show examples
of
this
problem.
First
of
all
Add a comma
,all
show examples
countries where live a lot of people must forbid to get married at
early
Add an article
an early
show examples
age,
a
Correct article usage
the
show examples
government should take into consideration families that have children every year. It is undeniable that we use thousand of polypropylene pockets every year. These pockets are made from materials that
within
Change preposition
over
show examples
the years they do not rot. In order to avoid pollution we have to stop using it. Potting
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
trees is one of the best ways to change
life
Add an article
a life
show examples
.
Submitted by malikli.malik1995 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!
What to do next:
Look at other essays: