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Fossil fuels (e.g. coals, oil and gas) are the main source of energy for most countries. However, alternative sources of energy (e.g. wind and solar) have been encouraged for use by some countries. Is this a positive or negative development?

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In
this
 highly changed 21st Era,many countries
are tend
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 to utilize
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fossil fuels as a main source of energy,
however
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 the rest of them are dependent on promoting wind and solar energy.
This
 essay agrees that
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it provides more than a thousand advantages than drawbacks,as environmental pollution may have been shortened by significant portions. One of the
first
 benefits of using alternative products as
a
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 main source
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is it provides less contamination for
environment
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the environment
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 which means clear nature,gives
life long
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 expectancy.
For
example
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 take sangardak falls as an example.It supplies both
quickly
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 encouragement for individuals and tourist attraction,meanwhile it provides
more
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 economic budget for society.But it has not got any drawbacks for
environment
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. On the negative side
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utilizing more fossil fuels can lead the ecosystem to overcome huge troubles.
Furthermore
,burning coals or products like that,
facilitate
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 the most poisonous air which can affect badly the human body.And it has a significantly bad reaction to
Ozon
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 layer.
For instance
,North and South polar ice
is
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 going to melt day by day.
Thus
 may
observed
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 more highly than ever before,in these decades.
However
,
this
 outcome is not worried
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 any masses or the government. To conclude,nowadays taking fossil fuels as a source of energy is highly proposed in many places but in some developed
countries
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 they opt for more solar panels at home
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or windmills for generating heat.I firmly believe that the latter
outweigh
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 the positive development
the
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 former
one
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