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Nowadays, a lot of offices employ open-space designs instead of separate rooms for work. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

#offices #open-space #designs #rooms #work #outweigh
over the
last
 decades , the way that everyone in business is done has changed dramatically due to the major changes in technology. so in the era of
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 are going to be changed from one room into
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an open areas
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. so is
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 development positive or there are some drawbacks
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 choosing
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environment
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 would like to explore the pros and cons and
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 draw
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conclusions in the upcoming paragraphs.   I will start by looking at the advantages of
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choosing open
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 work area rather
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 working in a
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separate
 room.
Firstly
 , everyone will
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feel
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 equal and there would not be any kind of discrimination among
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all
employes
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employees
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.
Although
 by working with each other in similar areas ,no one will feel
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deteriorate
 in
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environment
 as well as build good communication
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 which will lead to a good team.
firstly
 the major drawback of
this
 approach is about privacy so if everyone will work in the same area
then
 they would not be able to hide anything from each other in any way .so if someone is mentally disturbed due to some reasons and does not want to reveal his problem
then
 it is not possible to hide it in front of all because our body gestures
also
 reveal the truth what is
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going
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another
 person life. in
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 analysis
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 would like to say that there are some positive and negative
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points
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first
 of all on the positive side it helps to make good
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 while working in the same area and on the other side it break the privacy of someone.
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