Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
Some would argue that
parents
should mould their youngsters how
to be a good Change preposition
into how
citizen
while others think it can be taught in Fix the agreement mistake
citizens
school
. Parents
is
the Change the verb form
are
first
teacher of the children
and would love to listen and mimic them so it's important they show the correct one. On the other hand
, in school
they learn Add a comma
,school
differerent
things and develop their creativity and social skills. I do believe, that it's the responsibility of the caretakers to mould Correct your spelling
different
this young
Change the determiner
this young child
these young children
children
because home
is the first
classroom.
School
is an integral part of learning wherein they could meet and interact with different kinds of people. In addition
, teachers would teach the students with new lessons and challenging activities that would encourage them to participate. For instance
, the
subject Change preposition
in the
music
and arts wherein they have to draw and sing to develop their hidden talents to be able to showcase themselves. Change preposition
of music
Although
these would help in the childs
development to become a productive member of our community in the future Change to a genitive case
child's
but
character building should be taught by Remove the conjunction
apply
parents
at home
because it would give them a strong foundation of their character.
On the other hand
, guardians should teach these youngsters about respect, love, care and support which is effectively taught at home
because their minds are not yet fully developed so they tend to copy what they see. Minors who were raised by their parents
very well are more ready to face the world. For example
, in Piaget's theory about 2-7 years old as
the preoperational stage. In Correct your spelling
is
this
stage, children
increase their imitation of adult behaviours and they also
develop a fascination of
words both good and bad language. I believeChange preposition
with
,
it is crucial to teach these good values at Remove the comma
apply
home
because children
are the world's best "copy cats
" and Correct your spelling
copycats
parents
wants
the best version of their Correct subject-verb agreement
want
children
.
In conclusion, although
, school
plays another role in the
Correct article usage
a
childs
development Correct your spelling
child's
but
there are other more important aspects that Remove the conjunction
apply
parents
should teach their children
like good values to be a role model of
the Change preposition
for
next
generation which i
do Change the capitalization
I
belive
is the responsibility of every Correct your spelling
believe
parents
.Change to a singular noun
parent
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