Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

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should mould their youngsters

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to be a good

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while others think it can be taught in

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teacher of the

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and would love to listen and mimic them so it's important they show the correct one.

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, in

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they learn

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things and develop their creativity and social skills. I do believe, that it's the responsibility of the caretakers to mould

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because

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classroom.

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is an integral part of learning wherein they could meet and interact with different kinds of people.

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, teachers would teach the students with new lessons and challenging activities that would encourage them to participate.

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subject

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and arts wherein they have to draw and sing to develop their hidden talents to be able to showcase themselves.

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these would help in the

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development to become a productive member of our community in the future

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character building should be taught by

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because it would give them a strong foundation of their character.

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, guardians should teach these youngsters about respect, love, care and support which is effectively taught at

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because their minds are not yet fully developed so they tend to copy what they see. Minors who were raised by their

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very well are more ready to face the world.

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, in Piaget's theory about 2-7 years old

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the preoperational stage. In

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stage,

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increase their imitation of adult behaviours and they

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develop a fascination

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words both good and bad language. I believe

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it is crucial to teach these good values at

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because

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are the world's best "

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the best version of their

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. In conclusion,

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,

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plays another role in

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development

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there are other more important aspects that

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should teach their

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like good values to be a role model

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generation which

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is the responsibility of every

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