There is an increasing amount of advertising directed at children, which encourages them to buy goods such as toys and snacks. Many parents are worried that these advertisements put too much pressure on children, while some advertisers claim that they provide useful information to children. Discuss both views and giveyour opinion

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There have been arguments about the policy of creating advertising
content
directed at children. Some parents have concerns about the major role these advertisements play in their children's minds.
However
, in
this
essay, I will illustrate my point of view and support it with examples as well.
First
of all,
kids
should never be allowed to watch anything on the internet without supervision and guidance. These creators do not care about their
content
's influence on
kids
, as far as they sell the product, their job is done. In fact, these companies that are responsible for internet commercials directed to
kids
use
this
specific technic were they can catch the child's attention and shed light on their product,
therefore
, it increases their sales. On the other side, some advertisers claim that the
content
they are showing offers useful and beneficial information to younger people.
Nevertheless
, I find it hard to believe that they are looking out for the kid's sake
instead
of raising their views and income as well.
For example
, if the children are willing to be informed or interested in the knowledge it will never occur to them to look it up in advertisements,
instead
of reading a book or attending online classes. In conclusion, I believe that the parents are the most responsible for keeping eye on the
kids
because not all advertisers or
content
creators are aware of the significance of the position they are in and how much power they have.
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