In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disgaree with this opinion ?

This

essay will discuss the increasing numbers of people who have health problems from ingesting too much fast

food

and whether should

governments

start to apply higher taxes on

this

food

. I strongly agree with imposing a higher tax rate on fast

food

and the provider. On the one hand,the reason

of

Change preposition

apply

show examples

fast

food

seems to fit in people’s life perfectly in current society, is since everyone is busy with work and

socialize

Wrong verb form

socialising

show examples

with peers, healthy

food

choices do not

occurred

Change the verb form

occur

show examples

for the general public to pay attention to. Especially when these fast

food

chain stores provide

an

Correct the article-noun agreement

apply

show examples

attractive deals

such

as

,

Remove the comma

apply

show examples

a dollar ice cream or two dollars burgers, these are marketing strategies to lour people to purchase from them.

Although

governments

have implemented

many

Replace the quantifier

much

show examples

health-related information to the public to enjoy healthy

food

instead

of fast

food

, it has clearly shown that it is not enough to put a halt to the current health issue, by agreeing to impose a new tax rate on these

food

chains,

governments

can be able to track the ups and downs of the

food

trend and decide on how much tax to apply.

Furthermore

, it can consider

a social responsibilities

Correct the article-noun agreement

social responsibilities

a social responsibility

show examples

for these companies to contribute to the general people from what

the

Correct your spelling

they

show examples

earn in business. In my opinion, I strongly believe that

governments

much take action and

responsibilities

Fix the agreement mistake

responsibility

show examples

to reduce

this

phenomenon, as businesses will only grow bigger when

cuntomers

Correct your spelling

customers

are keen to pay for

its’

Correct your spelling

its

show examples

products. By restricting the company from selling fast

food

at

such

Add an article

a such

show examples

low

price

Fix the agreement mistake

prices

show examples

, the general public will eventually turn their option to alternatives

for example

fruits and vegetables.