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You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. • describe what you enjoyed about the course • say how much cooking you've done since the course • suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer

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Dear Ms Ann, I hope
this
 letter finds you well. I am glad to know that your institution received permission to conduct more cooking-related courses. I am happy to write my feedback about your
course
 which I attended
last
 month. I have not forgotten the wonderful days which I spent in your cooking class. Mostly I enjoyed the live sessions of the
course
 which give me a chance to experience different
food
 styles, from fusion
food
 to tribal foods. As a
foodie
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 I had been enjoyed different tastes like continental, Spanish, Turkish and Indian while we were practising international cuisine. I prepared the
food
 for my friends and family and they commented that my foods are delicious. I
the
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plan to start a YouTube Channel for cooking instruction for international
food
. I have recently seen an advertisement that you have started bakery making
course
, I have interested to join that
course
also
. I will be appreciated it if you could send me the details of the
course
. I look forward to hearing from you Yours sincerely Jennifer
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