Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

It is clearly seen that technology has been affordable and available to

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in the current era, which allows mature people to take remote

working

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and enables pupils to study without the need to leave their

home

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. Debatable as it is, I hold the point of view that

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advancement of technology would have

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impact on professional and educational prospects despite some drawbacks. On the one hand, employees are now able to attend meetings through online platforms thanks to the invention of many state-of-the-art technologies. Organizing online meetings give attendees more time to prepare for more detailed presentations and clearer ideas when speaking.

For example

,

instead

of bringing along any paper documents before meetings, they save all their documents and files

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their computers so that they can share the computer screen

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others when making a presentation.

In addition

, pupils can stay away from long distances to schools. It means that they can learn anything they want at their own place

instead

of having to travel so far in a long time, which wastes so much time.

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, learners now can

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in any online

courses

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in any

fields

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, even an abroad university. After taking online tests and completing the course, they can get an online university certificate which is equal in quality

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the physical one without any need to study abroad.

On the other hand

,

technologies

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technology

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can bring some harmful negativity regarding professional and educational aspects.

Firstly

, employers can definitely find it hard to control and supervise the quality of tasks assigned to their employees.

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, employers totally cannot communicate with their workers face-to-face, which can lead to difficulty when discussing some particular problems employees encounter.

Secondly

, up-to-date technological inventions can hold potential harm to

children

. Without any need to travel,

children

can have the possibility to immerse into a sedentary lifestyle, which results in their mental and physical

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badly

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effected

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.

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, studying at home for a whole day long makes pupils sluggish and don't want to join in outdoor activities to feel more energetic and train their physical health. To conclude,

although

holding some disadvantages

such

as difficult communication between colleagues and the possibility to have

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effect on

children

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development, I deeply believe that advanced technologies nowadays have more good than harm,

such

as helping people to work more effectively and

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children

to learn more actively.