People who live in big cities face a number of problems in their daily life. What are the main issues people in cities face? How can this be tackled?

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individual
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who
living
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in big
cities
face
alot
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a lot
lot
of
problems
in their regular life. In
this
modern era, the main problem is
traffic
and
pollution
.
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essay will examine
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how we can solve
this
problem. The main cause of living in big
cities
is
traffic
this
means that
,
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it
create
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alot
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a lot
of
traffic
noice
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noise
along with
this
, it
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a waste
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waste
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plethora
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of important time.
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, due to
traffic
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people
face
road accidents and
saffar
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suffer
with
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health diseases.
Secondly
,
people
also
face
pollution
problems
which
is
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very serious for them through
this
, they cannot live peacefully
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,
traffic
and
pollution
problems
are very serious and everyone should
be need
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to reduce
it
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them
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.
Traffic
and
pollution
problems
are very serious in big
cities
however
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, if all individuals work on it
then
it
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they
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can be reduced.
in addition
,
people
can overcome their use of vehicles they
shoud
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should
walk
on
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in
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their
work place
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workplace
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moreover
, everyone
need
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needs
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to
claer
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clear
here and
there
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their
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dust and waste rapper put
on
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in
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dustbin
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.
For instance
, at school teachers gave students lessons on
pollution
which
results
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they
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them
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able
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to clear their own rubbish
therefore
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,
people
cannot
face
difficulties in big
cities
. To conclude,
although
, living in big
cities
has more opportunities for
individual's
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but we cannot ignore
it's
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its
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drawbacks
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