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Some people believe that children should go to school at a very early age, but others think that they should not go to school until they are older. Discuss both the perspectives and express your opinion?

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According to a few
group
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 of
individuals
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 pupils should be started their
schools
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school
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in
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at
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the
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toddler's
age
, while others argue that they should go after
few
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 years of birth. Personally, I believe that early
age
 is the best time
period
 for entrance into the institutions. In
this
essay
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 both viewpoints with my opinion followed by a conclusion will be discussed. On the one hand, the factors why
in
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at
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 the earliest
age
,
children
 should start
their
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apply
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school.
To begin
 with, In the early
period
, when
pupil
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pupils
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start
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 learning there can be higher chances of
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 it without any pressure and feeling boredom.
For example
, these days it can be seen that a child is more creative and performing in the reality shows,
such
 as DID, little champs.
Also
, they are earning
name
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 and fame
in
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at
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 a very little
age
.
Furthermore
, by struggling from
primary
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the primary
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period
 at which concentration power is high
then
 an adult can enjoy the rest
life
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of life
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 with a healthy lifestyle.
As a result
, a successful person is that who settled very soon in their
life
.
On the contrary
,
children
 should go to
learning
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a learning
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academy
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academies
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 when they become older. Childhood is the best golden
period
 of
anyone
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anyone's
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life
.
Thus
, a child should enjoy that
life
 by having fun with their peer groups.
For instance
,
children
 explore their
talent
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talents
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 by themselves while doing some activities of their own interest. It helps them to explore their creativity without being
intervene
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of
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by
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 others.
Moreover
, a child can understand
about
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apply
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their interest and can
adopt
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adapt
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in
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to
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 their
life
.
Consequently
, going
in
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to
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schools
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school
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 should be started when students become understandable the importance of
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the study
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study
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studying
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. In conclusion,
although
 some people are in favour of sending
children
in
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to
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schools
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school
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 at an older
age
but
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I firmly believe that it should be started at an early
age
 because of good concentration power.
This
 makes learning easy as well.
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