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Nowadays many people choose ready-made food and refuse to cook at home. Why do you think it happens? What are the advantages and disadvantages of such choice?

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Nowadays, most
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people prefer purchased
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 rather than cooked homemade
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 at home,
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 there are both pros and cons to deciding to do
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 essay will discuss some of the reasons why junk
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 stay so popular and some of the challenges to be overcome. Let's begin by looking at the advantages of ready-made cuisine. One of the main positives of
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 trend it would save time. What I mean is that in current realities where people work overtime, they try to save time for more important things rather than cooking. It can help to focus on essential things
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 as carrying out new projects, self-development or just relaxing after hard work,
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 don't waste hours in the kitchen.
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, a ready-made meal keeps the money for the excessive expenses of
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 staff.
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, if a person lives alone it is so convenient to order
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 than cook by yourself. It can lead to saving money and don't afraid of spoiled
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. Turning to the other side of the argument about the disadvantages of
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 essay. The major problem is the quality of
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, especially lacking vitamins that are essential for our organisms.
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, junk
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 includes unhealthy overoil and cholesterol. It can lead to problems with the stomach and being overweight. Another issue is that some types of
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 are sometimes not tasty.
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, purchasing frozen
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 can lead to a loss of taste. All things considered of saving time and money and
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 problem with health and do not enjoy, personally, I believed that the advantages overweight the disadvantages.

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