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Some students work while studying. This often results in lacking time for education and constantly feeling under pressure. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

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In some cases,
students
 work and study simultaneously. The lack of
time
 for education and feeling under pressure is the result of
this
. Due to the large number of tasks that they have to do and be responsible for them, they usually do not have enough
time
 to study and for that, they feel pressured. A solution for that
,
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 could be to work less
time
 or get a
job
 only on vacations. Nowadays, many
students
 get a part-
time
job
 while they go to university because they need more money to have a healthy life.
However
,
this
 can bring some consequences, like neglecting their studies and being pressured to their grades.
For instance
,
students
 usually spend more
time
 working than studying.
Therefore
 do not give their best at university and get low grades.
Moreover
, they feel depressed about their results and in many
cases
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 their families pressed them to improve their marks. Even though
students
 have these problems, they could organize
their
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 in a better way their schedule to complete satisfactorily all their responsibilities.
For example
, they can speak with their bosses to
job
 for just a few hours and have
time
 to study. If they cannot do
this
, the
last
 option is to work on vacation
time
 and save money for the rest of the college period. To sum up,
this
 essay discussed the causes why some
students
 feel under pressure and don't have enough
time
 for their education and
therefore
 do not get good grades.
Besides
 , some solutions to solve them, like
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 a part-
time
job
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Financial necessity
  • Tuition
  • Living costs
  • Employability
  • Work experience
  • Under pressure
  • Mismanagement
  • Time-management
  • Academic pursuits
  • Flexible part-time study
  • Financial aid
  • Scholarships
  • Bursaries
  • Collaboration
  • Integrated programs
  • Education
  • Work-life balance
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