One of your friends is planning to visit your country and asking you for some information. Write a letter to him/her and say: o when the best time to visit your country is o suggest a plan for the travel o recommend places to visit in your country

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Jim, I *am writing to answer your question* about interesting places in my country and the best time to visit. I’m really pleased that you're coming to my country. It's better if you come here in spring or summer because the weather is suitable (for what activities?). The

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place you should visit is Isfahan. It’s one of the most famous cities in the world. There are beautiful

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old buildings with traditional architecture and special structures.

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Ali Ghapou palace, Siosepol Bridge and Chehel Sotoun Palace. you can stay in the city for 5 days and see all of them. After

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you should go to Shiraz. You can see the

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of the great and beautiful old kingdom in Iran. You can stay there for 3 days and go sightseeing. After

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you should go to the west of Iran. I think is the most beautiful part of Iran . it has mountains with

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and great plains. You can see people

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different cultures. Let me know if you need more

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. Best wishes, Reza

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One of your friends is planning to visit your country and asking you for some information. Write a letter to him/her and say: o when the best time to visit your country is o suggest a plan for the travel o recommend places to visit in your country

Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world.

Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people said that it is prime duty of government of developing countries to provide basic amenities such as health,education. Give your opinion.

Health services are a basic necessity. However, private companies have made them quite costly for ordinary individuals. Do the advantages of private health care outweigh its disadvantages?

qaqas) . The best way to solve the world’s environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?