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Nowadays we are producing and more and more rubbish. why do you think this is happening? what can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish Produced?

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These days all humans dispose of environmental garbage. The main reason for
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 day by day is our population and demands increasing and leftover consumption products would dispose of the environment as waste.
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, the government should involve in
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 problem and introduce many awareness programs to the public to decrease the disposal of waste. Nowadays an increasing population is a major problem all over the world.
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, their demand
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 growing and many industries produced products that vast
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 demand. They often produce things for human convenience life,
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, many food industries made processed food coming with plastics package. So after ,consumption the food and Plastic Packages throw as garbage.
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, all Supermarkets would provide customer's free grocery
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 and
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 often go to the shops with empty hands. Because they know they can get grocery
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 from those shops free of charge and the final result would be disposed to environment more plastic products. A Solution is that government should introduce new awareness programs and encourage
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 to reduce garbage.
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, they can ban all plastic
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 and boxes, and
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 introduce paper
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 and boxes which are environmentally friendly.
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 to that, they could educate all the children on how to manage wastage and how to recycle rubbish. The reason for that when they growing up they know how important to manage wastage. In Conclusion, the major problem
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 producing more waste because of a growing number of
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's Consumption which could be reduced with government involvement
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 as by introducing new rules and regulations.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumerism
  • disposable culture
  • over-packaging
  • non-recyclable
  • public awareness
  • waste management
  • environmental impact
  • recycle
  • recycling facilities
  • waste separation
  • single-use products
  • infrastructure
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