You travelled by plane last week and your suitcase was lost. You have still heard nothing from the airline Company, write to the airline and explain what happened. Describe your bag and tell them what was in it and what they were going to do about it?

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am one of the passengers who took flight number 75245LK from Tehran to London on 5th August. Unfortunately, my baggage did not come out after the flight.

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, I have explained

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to Mr Smith who was in charge at the Baggage Claim Office I have not heard from him as of now. My suitcase is a grey Samsonite whose size is 75*65 cm. There are three stickers on one side and

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heart-shaped stickers on the other side. My initials (AS) are

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written on both sides. There are a few books and a copy of my master's thesis in that luggage, which I need for the conference on 10th August. I would deeply appreciate it if you could give me a prompt reply at your most convenient. You can find my delivery address and my phone number in the attachment. Yours Faithfully, AN S

amir.safa1984Thu Dec 29 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

151 words

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