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Some people think language class should be taught in small class, others think the number of students does not matter. Do you agree or disagree?

#people #language #class #students #matter
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temporary
world
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 it is significant to learn more than 2 foreign
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. To be advanced in a
language
 people usually go to
language
centers
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, hire a tutor or choice
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learn
 by themselves. Some people claim that
the
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language
classes
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 be restricted by the
number
 of
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students
 in order to have better conditions for education.
However
,
this
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small
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a small
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 class structure
to
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 training in
language
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.
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 significant
number
 of people
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 not have
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 to study in small
classes
 if they are not wealthy. The
first
 perspective to look at the point is interactivity.
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Research
 have shown that being interactive while finding out something is the most beneficial way to understand and
making
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 it
permenant
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permanent
. To illustrate, it is obvious to
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understand
 that tiny
classes
 provide more
opportunity
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 to get in contact than big classrooms.
Secondly
,
noise
 pollution is
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an unignorable
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 issue in
classes
. The
noise
 is being made in crowded places more. So,
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it is not possible to get high quality of education while
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struggling
 with
noise
 and
other sort
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 of things.
Moreover
,
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learning
proceses
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processes
process
 can be solid by asking questions to the
instructers
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instructors
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. If constitutions want to supply that right to the students they must
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create
classes
 that include a small
number
 of students in there. In conclusion, reasons
of
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 interactivity,
noise
 pollution, and having
limited
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a limited
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number
 of right to ask questions to the teacher can explain why small
classes
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neceserry
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necessary
.
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