Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
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would argue that Correct your spelling
some
parents
should mold
their youngsters on how to be a good citizen while others think it can be taught in school. Change the spelling
mould
Although
, children learned new things in the
school that would develop their intellectual ability Correct article usage
apply
but
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apply
parents
should also
instill
good values Change the spelling
instil
that
is
more important later in life.
In schools, dedicated teachers would assist students improved in their subjects to Change the verb form
are
achieved
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achieve
In addition
, as an achiever
they could be sent to another place to compete Add a comma
,achiever
for example
in math. Despite the fame
they would receive from being a multi-awarded student without a positive attitude Add a comma
,fame
this
is meaningless.
On the one hand, parents
raised their children and taught them what is right from wrong. Moreover
, youngsters listen and mimic them so it’s important to show the correct one. Also
, if there is goodness in their heart, we will have a healthy community. In my opinion, that is
why it is crucial for parents
to trained
them at Change the form of the verb
train
young
age because they are the successor of our future generation.
In conclusion, school is an integral part of a child’s development but it is the primary responsibility of the Add an article
a young
parents
to disciplined
them. In my point of view, Wrong verb form
discipline
parents
are the first
teacher and play a vital role in developing in
their children to be Change preposition
apply
a
good role Correct article usage
apply
model
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models
of
our society.Change preposition
in
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