Some people think it is better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. other people believe it’s good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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ones with different views is surely one that begs the question of its true overall impact on an individual. In my opinion, due to the fact, that disagreements could sometimes help us learn more new things and evolve to be a better

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, making

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friendships are purely subjective.

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, a few

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claim that it is wise to choose

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and would aid in their success professionally. Take

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instance, two individuals with good

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encourage each other and share similar thoughts.

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lead them to start some business together and be

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can choose to become

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thoughts and disagreements.

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the betterment of an individual both on a personal and professional level. The same applies

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the opposite

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illustrate, a

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might be of an attitude that he is always correct ,in

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situations

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can intervene and let him know what is not correct.

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helps an individual in all aspects.

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reality. overall, not

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strengths of two arguments, my opinion stems from the fact that

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in mutual

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the bond. One will be more cautious and precise in doing things when

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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

Paragraph 1 - Introduction

Sentence 1 - Background statement
Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

Sentence 1 - Summary
Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

6.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

316 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

harmonious environment
validation
limit personal growth
exposure to new ideas
diversity of thought
critical thinking
problem-solving
deepen relationships
intellectual growth
emotional growth
like-minded
healthy disagreements
diverse perspectives
finding a balance

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Some people think it is better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. other people believe it’s good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Fully explain your ideas

You have just started a course in a collage which has no sports facilities of its own. Write a letter to the manager of the nearest private sports club. In your letter: • Introduce yourself • say why you are interested in this sports club • ask some questions about the club

The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion mil be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life.

schoole should stop using books for teaching to learn as they find them boring, and use films tv and computer instead. to what extent do you agree with this.