You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Modern communications mean that it’s no longer necessary to write papers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

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There is a non-negligible fact that
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letters
are disappearing because traditional communications revolutionized after
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century. So an increasing number of
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ordinary people
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that it is no longer to write
papers
. In my
views
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, I do disagree due to
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the unique
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values of
letters
.
First
of all,
letters
that are made of
papers
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are being used on various occasions in modern society.
This
is because it is a meaningful method to entertain individuals.
For example
, there is an unequal tradition that new couples usually make different types of invitation
letters
of
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wedding
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the wedding
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with extraordinary decorations and the public who are invited to take part in the wedding definitely are entertained by these. So, not only can
letters
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to
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deliver information
,
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these
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also
can let humans who received
this
kind of beautiful
papers
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feel thrilled.
Moreover
, obviously, it is a memorable way to communicate with others, due to
the
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the durability of the paper
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papers
durability.
For instance
, some birthday cards that I accepted from my intimate friends two years ago always let me enjoy
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precious friendship between us when I read these now;
therefore
,
letters
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become a necessary thing that modern human does not
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.
In addition
,
although
it is time-consuming, it is the
most safe
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ways
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that chat with others.
For example
, one of my classmates has violated her privacy by using social media;
hence
, it is not uncommon that
letters
is
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an effective communication to protect citizens' privative information. In conclusion,
although
writing
papers
fails
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to have an efficient trait, it is an attractive style as a
redult
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result
of its enjoyment and confidentiality.
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