Some people say industrial growth is necessary to solve poverty, others say industrial growth creates environmental problems. Discuss both points of view and give your own opinion.

Although
a number of people allege that overcoming economic problems needs industrial development,
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opponents
argue that it leads to
enviromental
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environmental
issues. I
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definitely
agree with
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the former
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opinion because it seems to me that
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way
to get rid of poverty is
industrial
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through industrial
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activeties
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activities
.
To begin
with, one can
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conclude
that facilities enable to boost
income
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level of citizens more than all other sectors
such
as
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tourism
or agriculture.
In other words
, industrial manufacturing is considered to supply
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opportunity
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to
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the community
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community
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by the
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governments
government
and they allocate
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amount
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of money to progress
this
sector which has
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perceived
main
way
to avoid lack of money. To illustrate,
noone
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no one
can deny that
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welfare
countries like Germany, England and France have reached their levels by using industrial tools. İf they had not benefited
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novelties, they probably would not be rich as
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recent
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.
Therefore
, it appears that the main
way
to stay away from
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of scarcities is
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tecnological
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technological
technologically
progressing
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.
On the other hand
, the states which have focused
just
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devolopment
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development
by using a number of methods to produce different products have caused various issues
such
as
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environmental
pollution. In fact, the main reason
of
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this
problem is emissions which have
emited
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emitted
limited
by facilities.
For example
, it has been seen that many factories all around the world emit
greengases
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green gases
greenhouses
to
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air
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. Not only
do
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this
behavior
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causes air pollution, but
also
it affects future generations in term of facing vary of nature difficulties.
Nevertheless
,
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taking some measures
such
as prohibiting
emission
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the emission
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of
greengases
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green gases
greenhouses
can deal with those problems. To sum up,
although
industrial
devolopment
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development
may
causes
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a number of natural problems like pollution, it maintains to be
main
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way
to avoid scarcity. I believe that some
measurements
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able to help mankind to tackle
negative
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the negative
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consequences of industrial development.
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