You own an old item that you think is valuable and would like to sell. Write a letter to the owner of an antique’s shop. In your letter: explain how you found the shop describe the item that you would like to sell say how much you would like to sell the item for

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Dear sir/Madam, I am writing

this

letter in regard to

sell

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to you are antique shop. I have been living

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Mirigama since 2003, and I noticed there are many antique shops around here, but you are shop has good feedback from the people and

majority

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said you offer

good

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price

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for the antique product. Nowadays during the pandemic

situation

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decide to sell my

grandfather

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which he gave to me for my birthday. It is

Rolex

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a Rolex

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brand and gold

color

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handmade

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. Now its

cost

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more than 100000 recently I check

online

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price regarding

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However

, I want to sell

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and need

collect

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cash as soon as possible because need to pay my

mother

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hospital bill. But I need to sell

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around

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75000. It would be

great

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help if you can

perches

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this

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from me. thank you so much. Yours faithfully, Asanka.

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