You own an old item that you think is valuable and would like to sell. Write a letter to the owner of an antique’s shop. In your letter: explain how you found the shop describe the item that you would like to sell say how much you would like to sell the item for

Dear sir/Madam, I am writing
this
letter in regard to
sell
Wrong verb form
selling
show examples
my
watch
to you are antique shop. I have been living
at
Change preposition
in
show examples
Mirigama since 2003, and I noticed there are many antique shops around here, but you are shop has good feedback from the people and
majority
Correct article usage
the majority
show examples
said you offer
good
Add an article
a good
show examples
price
Fix the agreement mistake
prices
show examples
for the antique product. Nowadays during the pandemic
situation
Add a comma
,situation
show examples
i
Change the capitalization
I
show examples
decide to sell my
grandfather
Change noun form
grandfather's
show examples
watch
which he gave to me for my birthday. It is
Rolex
Correct article usage
a Rolex
show examples
brand and gold
color
Change the spelling
colour
show examples
handmade
watch
. Now its
cost
Correct subject-verb agreement
costs
show examples
more than 100000 recently I check
online
Correct article usage
the online
show examples
price regarding
this
watch
.
However
, I want to sell
this
watch
and need
collect
Fix the infinitive
to collect
show examples
cash as soon as possible because need to pay my
mother
Change noun form
mother's
show examples
hospital bill. But I need to sell
this
watch
around
Change preposition
for around
show examples
75000. It would be
great
Add an article
a great
show examples
help if you can
perches
Change the verb form
perch
show examples
this
watch
from me. thank you so much. Yours faithfully, Asanka.
Submitted by asankabiz84 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Ultimate Speaking practice for IELTS

Practice speaking step by step, answer real-life questions, and build your confidence. Start your free trial and improve your speaking skills today!
What to do next:
Look at other essays:

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!