You own an old item that you think is valuable and would like to sell. Write a letter to the owner of an antique’s shop. In your letter: explain how you found the shop describe the item that you would like to sell say how much you would like to sell the item for

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Dear sir/Madam, I am writing

this

letter in regard to

sell

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watch

to you are antique shop. I have been living

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Mirigama since 2003, and I noticed there are many antique shops around here, but you are shop has good feedback from the people and

majority

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said you offer

good

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price

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for the antique product. Nowadays during the pandemic

situation

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decide to sell my

grandfather

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which he gave to me for my birthday. It is

Rolex

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a Rolex

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brand and gold

color

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handmade

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. Now its

cost

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more than 100000 recently I check

online

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price regarding

this

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However

, I want to sell

this

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and need

collect

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cash as soon as possible because need to pay my

mother

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hospital bill. But I need to sell

this

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around

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75000. It would be

great

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help if you can

perches

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this

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from me. thank you so much. Yours faithfully, Asanka.

Submitted by asankabiz84 on Fri Dec 30 2022

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1Word repetition
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17Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

152 words

6.00

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

In today’s world, people spend a lot of money on appearance because they want to look younger. Why does this happen? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

MORE AND MORE YOUNG PEOPLE ARE USING DRUG AND ALCOHAL AND AS A RESULT, BREAKING A LAW. WHAT ARE CAUSES OF THIS problem WHAT ARE THE SOME POSSIBLE SOLLUTIONS.

Write about the following topic. The most important function of music is that it helps people reduce stress. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.