You own an old item that you think is valuable and would like to sell. Write a letter to the owner of an antique’s shop. In your letter: explain how you found the shop describe the item that you would like to sell say how much you would like to sell the item for

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Dear sir/Madam, I am writing

this

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letter in regard to

sell

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selling

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watch

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to you are antique shop. I have been living

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Mirigama since 2003, and I noticed there are many antique shops around here, but you are shop has good feedback from the people and

majority

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the majority

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said you offer

good

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a good

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price

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prices

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for the antique product. Nowadays during the pandemic

situation

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,situation

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decide to sell my

grandfather

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which he gave to me for my birthday. It is

Rolex

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a Rolex

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brand and gold

color

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handmade

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. Now its

cost

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more than 100000 recently I check

online

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price regarding

this

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However

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, I want to sell

this

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and need

collect

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to collect

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cash as soon as possible because need to pay my

mother

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mother's

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hospital bill. But I need to sell

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around

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75000. It would be

great

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help if you can

perches

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this

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from me. thank you so much. Yours faithfully, Asanka.

asankabiz84Fri Dec 30 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

152 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

antique shop
valuable item
historical significance
condition
restoration
market value
negotiate
appraise
authenticate
provenance

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