In some countries, people generally
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their
children
that they should try hard for attaining whatever they want Which I believe has many negative effects on
children
's life.
There are many
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impacts
as a result
of telling
children
to hard try and gain anything , One of which is
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hopeless. If they try hard enough for attaining one thing and they do not receive
theChange the word
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favoriteChange the spelling
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result ,
then
they lose
their Correct pronoun usage
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hope and it can be caused
theyCorrect pronoun usage
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abandonFix the infinitive
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their attempt. Another disadvantage of
this
method is losing
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confidence
toChange preposition
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their parents or their adults, Because achieving anything is related to
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of factors
Such
as
environmentCorrect article usage
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, Their social situation and etc. Not only related to hard try. The other damage which is impressed by consist of hard trying to get any
things
is
Children
's creativity.
This
,in turn, The
children
totally focus on
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all the time and in
this
they do not spend time or energy to improve their creativity and they mind to find
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wayFix the agreement mistake
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for achieving
any Correct quantifier usage
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things
What Correct pronoun usage
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they want to have.
On the other hand
, there
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some beneficial
aspectFix the agreement mistake
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to
tellWrong verb form
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children
for hard trying to achieve all
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things
. One of which is
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increasing their motivation for reach to their wishes.
This
may lead the
children
to try hard as well as they can and they gain their goals. Another positive point is their independency that could be improved. Because they are hard trying to achieve
any Correct quantifier usage
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things
that they want will increase their self-confidence when they are faced with new challenges and new
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and
as a
they will convert to
an Correct article usage
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independent
personsCorrect the article-noun agreement
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.
In conclusion call mom
of courseAdd the comma(s)
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there are some beneficial elements for
encourageChange the verb form
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children
to hard try for achieving their wishes, but there have been many cases around the world of
children
that it will be caused a
lotsCorrect the article-noun agreement
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of social and mental problems for them in their future life's .