Fewer and fewer people want to become teachers especially in secondary schools. Why this happening and what can be done to tackle this problem?

It is irrefutable fact that nowadays more and more

people

are not interested to become educators

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secondary

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school. But it is not

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thing for

education

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of society. In

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I will highlight principal causes and give solutions to resolve them . The

first

and major reason for

this

is that in the present day

teachers

have

low

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income

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their job. Educators are being paid much lesser especially in high schools as compared to other jobs.

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instance

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if you work pharmacist in a private hospital and you can earn twice as much as a public

schools

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teachers

.

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people

for pursuing a career in the educational

feild

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.

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another problem is that teenagers are very difficult to deal with and pupils in

secondry

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secondary

schools tend to disobey

teachers

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orders . Despite we can take several measures to solve these issues.

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solution is that the

government

can raise

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the wage

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wage

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of

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educations

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. If

government

increase

teachers

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salary,

people

are more likely to work as

teachers

.

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government

can offer scholarships to students to

further

their studies as

teachers

.

As a result

,

people

with financial problems can afford to pursue higher education and become successful

teachers

. By way of

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I once again reaffirm my position that

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this

time fewer

people

want to become educators in the world. And we can be solved

this

problem with proper

planing

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. The

government

plays a crucial role to encourage the public

to

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because

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teachers

.