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how houses can be protected in areas which are prone to flooding. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

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The given charts illustrate the system of protecting the living area from inundating with stopbank and high boards. Before the levee was constructed,the 100-year flood level was reaching so high,that there were only 300 mm of freeboard left, when the internal runoff was coming from the hill.
Then
, the stopbank, which consists of the berm
and
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, a floodgate on the bottom and
freeboard
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a freeboard
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 on the top, has been built.Since that time,even when it was raining and water was leaving the shores, due to stopbank construction, it reduced the flood and internal ponding was still unable to reach the house floor level of the raised building. Overall,
as a result
 of the efficient design of the anti-flood ,system the damage of the deluge could be reduced,as the building is raised enough high, the berm and floodgate could diminish river flow,even when there are a lot of precipitations from the hill.
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